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Dear Future Husband

Danielle By:
User: Dannielle
Dear Future Husband

Amelia lived with her boyfriend Lucas for two years before they got married. She loved him dearly, until he began abusing her. She had left her home being able to free herself, she found herself living in Atlanta.

 

Watch as Amelia life takes the toil of abuse and tragedy......



This Book is Part of a Series "Dear Future Husband"
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Keywords: 
Love, Abuse, Tragedy, Atlanta, Father
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tc

It was great and I can not wait for the update.

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NiaTheCatThatSmilesBack

i think its good, it just needs a lot more detail. it happens a bit to fast.

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Dannielle

okay thanks for the honesty

Dannielle

and its all happening so fast because of the vast amount of things I have to take place in the story but thanks anyway XD

NiaTheCatThatSmilesBack

well, to draw in a reader, you want to leave them hanging and put more detail so they aren't taking in so much in a small period of time, that can confuse the reader, and if they're like me and read the whole thing in less than four minutes, you're gonna want to put more detail in.

NiaTheCatThatSmilesBack

oh and it can use some editing, some grammar, spelling and punctuation mishaps in there that need to be edited.

Dannielle

the story is finished yet i'm still editing it

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Deleted User

That was really good, I can't wait for you to update again

2 Comments
Dannielle

thanks

Deleted User

np

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Deleted User

It was a very wowing book! I don't know what to say besides well don't! though I hope my husband isn't like that!

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Deleted User

*done

Dannielle

lol thanks

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