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What if the one you love the most lies to you By:
User: dbinaaa
Deep Blue
I'm new to this and I'm kinda stuck, so if you can read it and tell me what you should happen next that would be really helpful.

Keywords: 
Lies, the pull, war, kingdom, love, mermaids
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Deleted User

it's really good. All you need is to fix all the errors. The rest of it(hint) should be like: Adam and sister jump in to save them, but emily all ready turned into a mermaid. She is secretly the sirens leaders child. Adam is her soul mate or twin brother. each would be pretty interesting. you're a really good writer, all in all.

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Deleted User

Look at the first word of my sentence. I'm supposed to be telling you about errors! LOL

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