u wrote it very good to me! and the things that u talked about was heart filled from your expierence. and i followed you there and back.the one thing i didnt find!was your fellings to everything that happened. but i guess you didnt want it out there yet.but that is what makes it come to life,and people to fell your pain, or what you was feeling at the time. i still like the way you wrote it.
There are few earthly bonds greater than one's relationship with one's mother. So many pristine descriptions and heartfelt memories that I can relate to, and, though straightforward, the story is very compelling.
This is a great testament to your undying image of your mother, and it makes for some wonderfully beautiful prose. Even though the ending is abrupt, the true message of the story doesn't end with the text.