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The Girl On The Edge

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User: girr22
The Girl On The Edge
After loosing his true love, Vivian, in a tragic accident Declan believes there is no point left in living. Due to his decent into a suicidal state his family puts him into therapy to try and help him get over his past, but will the girl he meets in the waiting room be his saving grace?

Keywords: 
loss, depression, therapy, love, romance
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Nina Kari

Personally I think it's a great start. The description you've put into this story is quite well and also the description of the girl makes me want to know her story. It's too soon to know where it's going, from a readers point of view but still, I enjoyed it. I read this earlier today so my brain forgets but I think I remember seeing something on the first page where it switched tenses but just for one word. It kind of threw... Show more

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