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Rose Petals

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User: elmheart
Rose Petals
I revised, I edited, and I added on to this story.

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ssandl64

Compelling and a little too similar to most vampire stories. In the second half, why not tell me something about them I don't already know? That aside, I like it.

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Deleted User

I think overall, the story was well written. You have a lot of spelling errors and I would recommend that you strengthen your vocabulary. Other than that, I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work.

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Deleted User

I think overall, the story was well written. You have a lot of spelling errors and I would recommend that you strengthen your vocabulary. Other than that, I think you did a great job. Keep up the good work.

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Deleted User

the story of Rose was really nice, well done :)
It would be better, if you wouldn't repeat so many words that often. I'll hope, it would be continued soon.
Kind regards,
Bridget

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