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My Little Pony

Pinky and the firefighters By:
My Little Pony
Pinky starts a fire and the fire station comes to the rescue.

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The story seems interesting, but like the other readers said, your story needs to be longer explaining how exactly did Pinkie start the fire in the first place, you know like a story.
What you wrote seemed more like a summary, also separate the narrating text from the character dialogs and add more punctuation marks.
I am saying all this because I want to help you.
I also wrote a book about ponies if you would like to read it... Show more

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you have a nice idea here
needs to be filled out a little more
Try to bring your characters to life a brief discription of each pony.
what are there markings
are they sweet or moody
let us know them

involve your readers so they will start to care and you will have a much improved story

well done so far

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I like the book but maby you could make it longer. like tell why the candle fell, why did she need a candle any way? and where was she when it happend was she even at her house?Oh i almost forgot keep up the good work.

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