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The Argument

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The Argument
A literary sketch about a couple at odds.

Keywords: 
Love, Marriage, Men, Women
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sylvia.kilmart

WAS A GOOD STORY.

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girlinglasses89

Hi Rebekah, thanks for the feed back :) This piece stands alone. I wrote it one day when I felt the need to write something different, something I've never experienced. This was the result. I don't really know who the protagonist is because, as in life, they both have their issues. She's a control freak and pushed him away, he cheated on her....

As far as the ending, I really like it because I feel it signifies what's... Show more

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rebekahjennings

Hi Girlinglasses,

Just giving your work a read now. I liked this story. I think your writing is tight. I think your dialogue works well. Is this a stand alone piece or is it part of something bigger? If its a stand alone I might ask some structural questions like: It seems you're using the affair with the twenty-four year old as a 'reveal' and reveals don't necessarily make a story. Yes, they do in mysteries but not in every... Show more

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lazarus67

Sad...but so tue in so many relationships....nicely written

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etelizabeth

Yes, I was pulled in, and yes, you left me wanting to know more. A good job! Elizabeth

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girlinglasses89

Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback!

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gooduklady

You told this well. The reader is drawn into the story, as though she were standing between the two. Well done.

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