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Daughters of Thunder

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Daughters of Thunder
Two Daughters, one Father, one brutal enemy...determined to be the keeper of both

Keywords: 
evil, sisters, father, kidnap, power
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evangheline

you made my day thank you so much for taking the time to read this I will add more soooooon (I hope)

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evangheline

Thank you so much, I will be posting more soon, I have been really busy with my family and work but I promise more will come soon. Again thank you so much for reading!

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Deleted User

ok finished reading the section... you have me hooked. Keep writing!!!

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Deleted User

Okay I read the first 2 chapters and so far I LOVE it...

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evangheline

great advice thanks :-) I will definatly let you know when I update more... been doing tons of overtime at work so my story has been comming along slowly :-(....

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lesliethompson

You're doing great! I love the way you've taken the plot to the next level, continuing to warp and twist your characters upon themselves. However, constant proof reading is essential. Try reading your work aloud (with or without an audience. I do mine in my linen closet) its an efficient way to make certain of inconsitencies, typos, and redundancies in your work. Let me know when there's more.

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evangheline

Thank you so much :-) I appreciate you reading it, stay tunned there will be more hopefully by the end of this week. Hugs!

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lesliethompson

Very nice. You've taken a rather standard story, and through imagery and turn of phrase, you have delivered something tense and exotic. Kudos to you.

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evangheline

Thank you so much for your encouraging review, it has definatly inspired me to continue this story :-)

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