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Grinndle's Life

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Grinndle's Life
In Olden Days

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robbedbygreed

Very interesting. I liked it. A nice, nonchalant view of being the court jester and the life that comes with it. Well done.

I do, however, have some critiques:

Your sentences are fine, actually quite good. But sometimes they are way too long or too short, taking away from the nice, smooth flow of your story. And when sentences are too short, the story(and I mean anyones story) will become much like a list. So I'd encourage you... Show more

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rgabel

Love the flow of the story, the descriptions, it was so realistic. Thank you for sharing your work. I appreciated it. Robynn

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bluedragon

Thanks rgabel, it is always nice to know your work is appreciated somewhere. I write all kinds of short stories, the troouble is I cannot always get them onto bookrix!!!! My fault, not good with computers or handling new sites.
Bluedragon

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