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The Blood Red ruby

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The Blood Red ruby
Ancient artifacts, the seeking of.

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libby6

enjoyed this. loved everyone passing out and the nasty beastie crawling out of the box to eat them up. rather poeish

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countzero

The story had promise. Archeology, ancient tombs, aliens, but I couldn't really relate to your characters. They felt like they were just there because you had to have someone there to perform those actions, automatons. And the last few paragraphs got a little confusing so the ending fell a little flat. But still a good premise filled with some inviting ideas.

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bluedragon

I could possibly agree with you to some extent. The characters were a ehicle for the ending, which you say you could not quite get. Obviously i was not clear enough. It was written some time ago so I would not now go back and alter it, but thought for the future. I have another... Show more

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cleveland

I enjoyed the stor thugh at one point I kind of detected a slight detachment. Something happened. It was as if you'd put your pen down and next time you used it the ink had dried.
The end might have been slightly different without the hovering aspect of gloom. Something else should have kicked it, another plot point, a story thread or character , even a bit of backstory. Worth thinking about.
Best
Cleveland

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bluedragon

Thanks for your comments. It is a while since I wrote the story and so a while since I have re-read it. I will take yoour comments on board for an other tale.
Evelyn

bluedragon

Thanks for your comments. It is a while since I wrote the story and so a while since I have re-read it. I will take yoour comments on board for an other tale.
Evelyn

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willie.works

We want with our eyes...And often pay with our lives.
Well written narrative of lust for something in spite of the consequences and karma attached.

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bluedragon

We should all want less and love more
Bluedragon

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paulashene

tale of horror which a lot of sci fi turns out to be...great tale..Paula

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bluedragon

thanks a lot Paula, knew I had not sent it to you glad you liked it
B;uedragon

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