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I really enjoyed this - it was something different. An unusual redemption story that gives hope to everyone who has regret. The main character is complex, but also a simple man. The dream of going back in time to right wrongs is something we all think about sometimes. I really enjoyed the writing and I can't wait to read more of your stories!
I really liked this revamped version with the subtle explanations for dummies like me who need to be hit over the head sometimes to "get" it. This reminded me a little of the Scrooge story in A CHRISTMAS CAROL - visited by ghosts of the past and being allowed to change the course of one's life. Very nice, Glen.
Towards the end,on page 49, change: Frank gruff demeanor to "Frank's gruff........"
Yes, a quick and easy 50 pages, filled with always-pertinent, forward-moving scenes. While the first killing was graphic enough and gripping, I was struck by the way you played out the gallows exit/entrance.
"Redemption", narrated using the classical Christian model, is always interesting to me, and you kept me immersed clear to the final, rather surprising end. Liked your Virgil:)