I just wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed reading this book! I would've told you sooner but I had to be impartial and whatnot as a judge but now that the contest is over I simply had to let you know that I thought the way you brought classic Greek mythology to modern day without the goofiness of some other stories that have tried the same thing was extremely well done.
Keep up the excellent writing!
it's nice to read a story based on mythology, and yours has such a unique feel to it. you have such a strong voice for someone so young - i can't wait to see your books on the top of the New York Times Bestseller list in a few years!
i agree with everyone else that you need to take care of those typos and small mistakes first :)
Heart-startling! Through mythology, you've managed to whip up a tale of your own - one of humanly emotion and thunderous power. To think that Zeus is dead and the throne is now open to the god banished for eons is unthinkable!
I think this is a story which you should continue to pursue. 8D