A very cute idea! I kind of guessed where it was going before getting to the end, but you put it together very nicely, and it was a fun read. There are a number of grammar errors and a few things that either contradict or don't make sense, but you say you're currently editing, so I'm sure you'll see them. Overall, this is a wonderful short story, and I really enjoyed reading it!
Picasso Meets Dr. Frankie
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