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A Lost Love

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A Lost Love
Short Story from a writing challenge.

Natalie runs from a clockwork monster in this snippet of a story.

This was just for practice. I haven't decided if I want to write more.

Keywords: 
love, death, monster, clockwork
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E.K. Perkins

Do you draw your own covers???? They're so cool! And your writing is awesome!

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indie23

It sounds like the beginning of a very interesting story. I would be interested in reading more. It sounds like a nightmare that needs to end, and soon. Good Job!

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indie23

Well the story seems quite intriguing. I would like to see you extend this story with a little help with editing.

The cover and the story idea caught me interest. I like stories like this. Good Work!

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the.dragon

Even though it was short, it definitely has to go on. I could feel the emotion radiating at the end. Very nice description of her struggle, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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xmeli.j.nightlyx

It's intriguing. I hope you decide to add more. Let me know...

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writingmum

Remember you have to have the minimum of 300 words to enter the contest, but judging by the comments here, it looks like you intend to expend it.
Let me know when you do and I'll come back and have a read.
Good luck
Wendy

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writingmum

Remember you have to have the minimum of 300 words to enter the contest, but judging by the comments here, it looks like you intend to expend it.
Let me know when you do and I'll come back and have a read.
Good luck
Wendy

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sereni

This is a terrific beginning, more please. Love your writing. Serena

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Jessica Kelley

Thanks for the huge compliment! You just made my day. :D

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gooduklady

Short and sweet. I expect most people will hope you write more before voting time in August. Look forward to seeing you expand on this theme.

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