Into the Sunset

User: jacki137
Into the Sunset
This hunger that he experiences forces him to ride from one dusty town to another. The pain is overwhelming, though his memories of why and how elude him. All he knows is he needs to eat and the next town is three days from here.

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J.C. Laird

That was quite a story you packed into such a short space. Well written and edited, as usual. You've spun another great tale. Your imagination certainly runs in high gear.

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Yowzer! Somehow I wasn't expecting the outcome! Weird and strange and wonderful, Jack.
The way you used memory to move the story forward was so good, flowing, never really a stop in forward movement. I was engaged from the first paragraph, totally. You did a marvelous job with this unique tale of the old west. Bravo!

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