Search
  • All Search Results
  • Books
  • Users
  • Groups
  • FAQs

The Frog

By:
User: jacki137
The Frog
Have you ever had to deal with a pesky little fly that was constantly buzzing around your head, distracting and annoying you? Well if this has happened to you, be glad you are not a frog.

Keywords: 
short story
Posts and Comments
Important Post
Deleted User

I laughed out loud at the ending. Brilliant. :)

Important Post
robbedbygreed

Well, well, well... I am humored! This is what I call a well told story. And though the dialogue between the fly and frog was a bit stiff, I loved it! I wonder how many frogs that fly has gotten... This could be the beginning of many adventures between the fly and his accomplice!

The only problem I have with the story is that it is a tad awkward to read in present-tense. I know it is my personal preference to read stories... Show more

Important Post
Deleted User

Great story Jack, loved the ending. I'm with John, this should be included in a children's book or something. Nobody does Flash better than Jack!

Important Post
RebeckDawn

I loved this cute short story - it really proves that we should treat others as we want to be treated :)

Important Post
epoch1

This was a delight to read. But they need to work on their timing just in case the next frog doesn't care to listen so long.

As usual, Mr Ivey, packs a lot of fun into a little story. It's what writing Flash Fiction is all about.

And few people do it better than he does.

Important Post
angamonkey

this was probably one of the most adorably funny and whimsical stories I've read today. I'm glad that I took the time to read your very short story and I am also glad that you gave the story such an interesting twist at the end. I absolutely loved this.

Show Additional Posts
To ensure optimal functioning, our website uses cookies. By using the website you agree to the use of cookies. More info
OK
Top of page
No Thumbnail Remove Please choose a reason Please enter the place in the book. en en_US