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User: jackleo
Flying
This is an inspirational poem, thought of when I was writing some ideas for a short story.

Keywords: 
Inspiration, Dreams, Aspiration
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jldams

Here's your first comment- and only one day in! There's a really great sound coming from this poem- loose and floating- just how you intended, I'm sure. Well done! Just a couple of things- did you mean to say ambiguousness? Or ambiguity? Other than that, the reader needs strict punctuation. You have commas, but there are no full stops, and this blurs the rhythm and the meaning in places. Be strict!
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