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Maylin *FINISHED*

The Dark Dimension By:
User: amulet97
Maylin *FINISHED*
Maylin, a normal 13 year old girl who was adopted, finds out she is from a different dimension. She discovers her new powers slowly, but she finds a small, black dragon. Slowly, she falls for him. When she finds out she must kill the dragons with her newly discovered powers, her life is torn apart between love and war. What will Maylin decide to do? Take after her mother, or protect her loved one. Or will she choose another decision that might just kill her?

A New World.
A New Life.
A Forbidden Love.


This Book is Part of a Series "The Dark Dimension"
All Books in this Series:
Maylin *FINISHED*
The Dark Dimension
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The Next Generation: Scarlet
*WORKING ON NOW*
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Gwinevere Keethley

I absolutely loved this book. It would be very neat if you had the next book feature Scarlets' life. Maybe even get Scarlet to get the dragons and 'Dark Ones' to be friendly.

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nana0o0o

i read your book till the end.. i think it was good but maybe you rushed the ending a little.. im sorry if you dont like my opinion and good luck with the next one

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Deleted User

Now, you need to go back and edit. I had to learn my mistake after I had already started selling. Find someone who will help and do it chapter by chapter within a group...

You have several similar kind of mistakes, when in a conversation "...... ," you need the comma if the sentence does not end. Many times you put a period where a comma should be.

Some of your sentences are fragmented.

I did enjoy the theme and tone of the book.

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amulet97

I know. I'm 16 now and I was like, 13 when I wrote this.

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Deleted User

does she die in the end like is she dead omg if she is i am so sad like why would you kill her off but other than that i loved lots

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samson2619

awwiieee thats so sad that she died i kinda wished she didnt die though

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samson2619

awwiieee thats so sad that she died i kinda wished she didnt die though

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