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Introducing Starblast

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Introducing Starblast
On Commander Darma Starr's shoulders rides the fate of humanity and a broken love her heart longs for. But can she save either? Your honest opinion please on this introduction that may become the prologue.

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rgabel

Review - First of all, excellent writing. You have a distinct 'voice' as a writer. Sounds like you've done your research.

It's interesting, I would love to read this story. I'm a science fiction fan.

My suggestion is to start a Prologue with the ship. Then open the story with Darma walking into the meeting. Just how I see it. Otherwise, good start. Let me know when you get this written. I would love to read it. Robynn

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