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Maria's World Becomes Whole Once More

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Maria's World Becomes Whole Once More
Maria is trying to reform her world again...

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jasmine.redolence

Thankyou for your comments and suggestions. When I make another book, I will be sure to inform you.

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Chris-Jean

Jasmine, your stories have a lot of 'meat on the bones', so to speak, which is great news for a writer.

You can add length to your stories, and draw the reader in by developing Maria's character further.-E.G. by describing her feelings at every opportunity.

Also introduce breaks/chapters when changing scenes.-E.G. Maria's father getting divorced from his cheating wife, and describing Maria's and her siblings welfare.

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