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The Heart That Stopped Beating

The Heart That Stopped Beating
Torian Spencer is a pianist, a sister, and a zombie-lover. Literally.
When she walks the fence, attending a school that openly admits 'Others', she is faced with a few decisions that might just change her life.

Nick was bright. Or used to be. As in before he died. He had heard of the Changed, and the Others, but he never thought he'd be one...

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Breathing hard, I waited for him to say something. Anything. Because, frankly, the awkward silence was killing me. He seemed to be concentrating on my fingers, which were resting lazily on middle C.

“Well,” I snapped questioninglyavoid adverbs ending in ly my tone one of impatience and anger. This is telling. Instead, something like: I wondered if he could tell I was angry and becoming impatient.

“Well?” (same line) He raised a... Show more

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i definitely love zombies and enjoy talking about the "zombie apocalypse" but your story is something new and different and i really liked reading it.

i'm excited to learn more about Nick and get more character development from everyone else.

please let me know when you add more!!!

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Great grammer and spellin is also great.
I have to admit its a little borrin at the start, not enough humour in my opinion, but its not a bad idea.
although, theres somthin that gets me, they are at school at the start, right? and 'The Others' and the 'Changed' are all runnin about with their guts hangin out, how would they not make it to the school, espicially when Sterling had his music full blast, wouldnt they hear it and... Show more

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Wow, this book is great!
I'm guessing the Changed are zombies or something and the Others are... hmh... I don't know. But I love it either way! :D Please continue writing and update me xD

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