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Resting Spot

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User: jesswygle
Resting Spot
A young boy walks home from school alone. He stops half way home to rest and have a snack out of his lunch box. But on this particular day, he gets a pleasant surprise.

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mysterywriter723

I like the way you used color in your descriptions of the characters. Autumn is my favorite time of the year. Great job with this sentimental little tale.

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jenjen1132

This was really a sweet book. it's the perfect beginning of a friendship--and maybe more than that---for the main character.
I really enjoyed it!

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crosswaysnet

after re-reading a few times, i concluded that each episode is strong enough to stand on its own, and you managed to blend them into an even stronger story together.

good job.

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felixthecat

You have a definite gift for storytelling. I loved the innocence of this piece; the nice, nice upbeat ending.
I have to agree with crossways net on this one, however. Eliminating any of the three would weaken the overall "story arc", I think. But again, the images and conciseness are exceptional.

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crosswaysnet

Sweet coming of age story - well done! but still not sure if it fits the criteria of the contest...

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S.P. Johnson Jr.

A sweet story. There were a few formatting issues, but I call them forgivable as it's often just as much or more an issue with the site as with the author. My only real concern is that the three drabbles are not complete in themselves and therefore not compliant with the contest guidelines. All the same, well written.

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