You have a definite gift for storytelling. I loved the innocence of this piece; the nice, nice upbeat ending.
I have to agree with crossways net on this one, however. Eliminating any of the three would weaken the overall "story arc", I think. But again, the images and conciseness are exceptional.
A sweet story. There were a few formatting issues, but I call them forgivable as it's often just as much or more an issue with the site as with the author. My only real concern is that the three drabbles are not complete in themselves and therefore not compliant with the contest guidelines. All the same, well written.