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The Heartless Man

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User: naevra
The Heartless Man
A story about a woman who find herself in a train station with a stranger who evidently changes her life in ways that cannot be explained...

Keywords: 
love, story, station, short
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naevra

thanks a lot bookzilla :P I'll start editing it a bit more and adding more stuff, but like I said I wanted feedback to see what changes and fixes I needed to make lol. Btw, most of my mistakes might've been because my native language is spanish so I tend to confuse a lot of words lol but thanks a bunch!!

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bookzilla

i can tell that the idea for this story is a really good one. i have never read anything about a heartless man before... but are they good or bad?
i found your story to be very interesting, but also confusing. it seems like it was written in a rush and things are pushed together where there should be spaces and more explanations.

here is an example from the first page:

when you say that he is wearing all black "like most... Show more

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