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My mixture of little snippets of short stories or paragraphs that may or not develop into full grown pieces of work. This is basically a small un-order fragment of my imagination. Any that you like i may work on.

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Rgabel

Review - First, I must say I like your way with word images. 'complex state of thinking' caught my eye as well as other unique combos. Love the cover.

In 'Desperate Measures' you really had the inner monologue going quite well. Definitely two different voices and views. But towards the end, when you switched back and forth with every other paragraph, I became quite confused as to which one was speaking. You need to break up... Show more

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johnpallister

Thanks for your comment. I do tend to write intrigue dark stories, but i do portray hope in some of my work and i'll let you know of a happier ending story soon. Glad you enjoyed.

John

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RevkenR

Personally I like a happy ending. Mostly sad endings make me sad, but that is life.

You are a very talented writer. You bring people right into your stories.

I loved them all, and any one, or all of them could become a book. Perhaps in the end you could even make a happy ending for them all.

Thanks for the joy of reading you bring.

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