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Drowning

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Drowning
Cameron is a normal pre-teen girl. She loves sleepovers, especially ones where you ask your friends stupid questons. But when she realizes her worst fear during her sleepover, will she be able to sleep at all?

Keywords: 
oxygen, drowned, sleepover, girls, fears
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J.C. Laird

It's refreshing to read a story that has been self-edited so well. Flawless punctuation, good paragraphing and dialogue formatting. The writing was very clean. The only things that I could find were pg. 9: "She lied down...(should have been laid) and pg. 12, failed to capitalize an S at the beginning of a sentence. That's it!

The best two sentences: "The water beat down on her back, and slowly dragged her fears down the drain.... Show more

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