I thought it was a good book. Yet the only thing is that Mark was so nonchalant about killing. when Taylor asks how are you? Mark answered good, considering I just did my first kill..No compassion or remorse. liked it but was not sure why they were killing these people. It was well put together,just a little confusing.
This is a really good idea that could easily be fleshed out more. As it is now, it's rather spare in detail, reading somewhat like a script for a video game. I really need something to go on for why I should care about this character and his conflict. Give some more sensory description to help put the reader into the story.