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Love Moments

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User: Kalai
Love Moments

Anxious moments always geared up the tension between two love hearts. Compromising expectations between them builds up the moments of love. Will intimacy also evoke fear?

#bus, #love, #coldwar, #moments
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It's reasuring to read/see how in some cultures innocence still prevails. Nice tale of such a case.

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The fear of intimacy. It is one that so many people have, but one that does not get much attention.

You really captured the emotions and the courage to overcome the fear.

Well written

Good luck in the contest.

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A nice effort, Kalai, but I have a feeling you have perhaps used a translating site to convert your story from your language to English. I only say this because it is a little difficult to follow and understand what you intended to say, and when I reached the end of the story, I was still a little confused.

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