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Drabble Contest Entry

3 Very Short Stories By:
Drabble Contest Entry
3 very short stories about getting lost,reminicing and what could happen in real life. BY Kally Estrada aka punkrockchikk.This book was created for the Drabble contest!

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leahjaye

These stories were too short and did not have much detail to them. The best part of each story was the ending, not just because it was done but also because that is where there was the most detail. This detail that you had at the end should have been placed throughout the stories. The stories should have been longer as well. I would suggest different titles as well because they were too simplistic and told the reader... Show more

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felixthecat

Everyone seems to be focused on your "exit"...the last drabble:) Darned if I wouldn't have RUN from that dog!

Good going either way.
Check those tense agreements maybe? If you begin in past, I think it wise that you remain in past.
But, good:)

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punkrockchikk

Thanks for reading! Don't forget to vote for me! :)

p.s. Please check out my other book CAKE as well it's just a sample but the entire book will be posted soon as I finish.

XOXO -K

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