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Grimshaw Mysteries

Haven homocides Book 1 By:
Grimshaw Mysteries
Rick grimshaw is an old school detective in a new world of technology and crime.

In the newage Metropolis of Haven, the USB stick is mightier than the revolver.

But Haven is not without crime. Blood runs red against both the dull whitewashed streets of the slums, and the neon filled streets of the thriving colonies alike.


This Book is Part of a Series "Grimshaw Mysteries"
All Books in this Series:
Grimshaw Mysteries
Haven homocides Book 1
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Haven Homocides Book 2
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Haven Homocides Book 3
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Grimshaw Mysteries
Haven Homosides Book 4
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felixthecat

Your choice of tense is just fine. There is an immediacy to it that only Present can give. Go back and check your punctuation, however. Remember to put a comma, or exclamation or question mark inside ending quotes in dialogue that is followed by a tag.

Your voice is also excellent, I might add. Just do a bit more "proofing".

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kylerjames

Thanks! These books were just a bit of fun. I've taken my main book down for proofing, but its great to hear that I'm on the right lines.

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Glynis Rankin

I like your protagonist voice and the way you describe the scenes draws the read into that world. This story has a Blade Runner feel about it and that's one of my favorite movies.

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Deleted User

I love it! The first few sentences drew me in and I couldn't pull away from it. I really like it!

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kylerjames

I'm really glad you liked it! It's something a bit darker than what I normally write, but sometimes I just feel like writing something different. I've released the next few chapters now incase you were still interested in what happens next lol

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