Search
  • All Search Results
  • Books
  • Users
  • Groups
  • FAQs

THE OLD PUMP

By:
User: lazarus67
THE OLD PUMP
Darkness, confusion Illusion

Posts and Comments
Important Post
mysterywriter723

That was a very compelling story, Laz. I didn't expect the way it turned out. I was thinking maybe he was just dreaming or hallucinating. You're very crafty and wily, like a fox.

Important Post
totallytennantmad

WOW! Now that is one brilliant story. I loved the vision, the confusion and the darkness of the piece.

2 Comments
lazarus67

Thanks...I told you that you would.
You'll like LOVERS and PLAYERS....but it's not so dark...yet it has your kind of twist.

lazarus67

Thanks...I told you that you would.
You'll like LOVERS and PLAYERS....but it's not so dark...yet it has your kind of twist.

Important Post
Deleted User

good imagery. strong title.

1 Comment
lazarus67

The end just jumped out at me.

Thanx Brandon

Important Post
lazarus67

The cover is a picture I took outside a hospital, when I did deliveries there.I don't know who she was, but she looked sad sitting outside in the sun. I always look for chances to take photos.

Important Post
Donna.Ward

I really liked it, surprising twist at the end I wasn't thinking that at all :P

1 Comment
lazarus67

I was surprised too
That's what I love about writting....you never know what's around the corner even though it's you who is at the steering wheel.

Thanks

To ensure optimal functioning, our website uses cookies. By using the website you agree to the use of cookies. More info
OK
Top of page
No Thumbnail Remove Please choose a reason Please enter the place in the book. en en_US