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FORGOTTEN

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User: lazarus67
FORGOTTEN
Feeling lost and mostly forgotten, Theodore sits in a filthy alley, all sad and dejected.

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Deleted User

No that is terrible....
but a great story

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lazarus67

Thanks Puppy

Deleted User

No problem

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Deleted User

Very unique and clever way to have the reader come up with the ending they like best. I tend to like the first. To me, a young mind, not fully understanding the way of the world, would think this.

Very enjoyable story.

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aravon

I'm so glad this story had a happy ending. 3 of them. I was surprised because I thought he was a bum. I was afraid of where the story seemed to be going. I liked the first ending the best. I really liked your poetic description of everything in the alley. Especially the snow covering everything and making it look clean and white. This is a wonderful story.

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lazarus67

Thanks. I thought that maybe 3 different endings would be fun and at the same time please more folks. I had written another story earlier with two endings, called 'Hot summer nights'.

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Deleted User

I like the idea of providing alternate endings. I know I'm torn between story paths myself... sometimes.

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Alternate endings give the power to the people.

:)

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Deleted User

Three lovely endings for sweet Theodore. I loved the last one. It was nice that the man found him and didn't just ignore him.

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lazarus67

Thanks Sereni....It really amazes me to see how many spelling mistakes ( although minor ) can be overlooked by so many...lol.
Thanks for noticing.

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sereni

Your story is delightful and wonderful for a child of any age to read. When I started reading I supposed that Theodore was a bum living in the alley and dining like so many do these days from the restaurant dumpsters. Looking back over the story I saw where you said he had been thrown out, and that should have been my first clue that you were not talking about a person. The ending was a surprise, and I chose the first ending.... Show more

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angamonkey

This was beautifully written. I loved all alternate endings but my favorite one had to be the first one. Something forgotten is found and feels loved once again.
Though happy endings can be seen as wishful thinking at times, I think this happy ending had a sense of realism which made it so much more fun to read.

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felixthecat

The FACT of the matter is, the story captivated me. That is the bottom line :)

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