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Reflections

Little girl's Short Stories By:
Reflections
Tiara generates in Reflections, traumatic life experiences occurring throughout her adult life and childhood, leading her down a dark path of abuse, pain, and shame, as well as capturing the fun & happy memories of her past. In Little Girls's she escapes in her fantasies and writings, by unraveling her dismay

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bharris

Hi Linda,

Wow that was epic! Sorry that it has taken me a while to respond.

A well written story for the character perspective, with Tyrone and Tiara feeling solid and with some depth.
The flow of the story may require some work by cutting down on the detail - this can often hinder the reader and story development.

Other than that, very well written!

Ben

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lbolden.books

Hi Ben,

I appreciate you reading Reflections...thanks for the observation; I have received some very good advice about the book. I think my next step for Reflections/Little girl's short stories will be a re-write, which will flow better for the next book, a continuation (Revitalized)

Thanks again

Linda

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lbolden.books

Hello Michael,
I appreciate your heartfelt feedback about reflections…your input is very encouraging as I move forward in all of my creative endeavors. I have a lot of plans for my future writing and as time permits I will continue the journey of developments…Thanks again-)

Linda B

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lbolden.books

Hi Marie,

I appreciate your kind thoughts about the characters in my book. Thanks for reading and for your vote...

Linda B

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marieta

The gentleness, the tenderness that Tyrone feels for Tiara , the more aware woman who don't deceive herself , with sometimes as much lucidity as vulnerability , knowing how to mask the underlying sensuality behind the prudent indifference...I appreciate many aspects of the narrative structure...You got my vote.

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lbolden.books

Hi Joe,

I really appreciate your comments and suggestions about my book. This is what make writer’s better as authors when we are able to make suggestions and obtain feedback from others. I am working on my second book and I needed as much input as possible to have a better flow with my words. Creativity is one thing but to have an even flow to keep the audience interested is another issue. Thank you very much for reading the... Show more

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