Thank you very much for spotting those. I admit i knew the power of a kiss had a strange flow. But i did not notice the miss use of words in "I Used to have this dream", it was the correct spelling in the wrong context, and i have made the punctuation changes to "Ask me Not". I greatly appreciate you taking the time to tell me about these things and i hope you come back and read some more later. :)
I do agree with Paigecarter on how deep your messages are and I rather enjoyed A power of a kiss. However, I want to give a straight answer: I used to have a dream has some misspellings, A power of a kiss flow doesn't flow in the last chorus, and ask me not much just punctuals missing. I hope this helps and doesn't discourage you. Sorry for stepping on your toes but it's really good.