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In a world where an evil tyrant rules over men, people are forced to obey his commands or face the consequences. When one teenage boy decides to defy those rules, he finds that it's hard to do it alone.

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Although this is not a genre I usually like, you wrote this so well that you kept my attention throughout. Very impressed with your mastery of sentence structure and grammar...and your storyline is gripping. I look forward to reading more of this story.

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Hi Liz. Sounds good to me. Great with punctuation and Grammar. I couldn't find anything that made me stop and feel like taking notes. Refreshing to find work where care is taken with these details. I look forward to reading more from you.

If you have a spare minute I have a story entered in the Get Published contest called A Hunter's Journey. I'd love to see what you think. If you find anything you don't like, feel free to... Show more

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hey, i really liked this!!! The setting reminded me a little of Eragon by Christopher Paolini! I really liked it though!

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Thank you. Glad you noticed the "forward". I always spell that word wrong. Yes, his brother's name is Freed. I just thought it would be an interesting name. :)

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Good start. Liked the setting. Can't wait to see what that stone represents.
His brother is called "Freed" ?
One small spelling 5, 'foreword' should be 'forward'.


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