this could be the start of a new series, but it still needs some work. Don;t give up.
hey um... u need to finish this sound like a great book
omg that book was so boring i have my friend here and she read it to and said the same thing it was really boring is that even a book???hugs chris
No offense, but I think Richelle Mead had something different in mind, I like the start though. It could use some editing too.