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I'll make you dream my name

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I'll make you dream my name
Some people are in your life to love you. Some people are in your life to knock you down so you can rise again and rise above expectations and limitations.

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Deleted User

Nicely done.

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tj.gonzales

For one with such a pretty face, you have a very dark side. A very dark side.....And yep, I like it.....

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Lucia Morosanu

I don't really know what one has to do with the other, but thanks.

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RebeckDawn

"Yet everything has an end, even pain" - That is a great line!

I like how coherent this is - easy to follow and easy to feel the emotions searing through each word. Great job!

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Lucia Morosanu

Thanks :))

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Deleted User

This was a very interesting poem. Your use of words was impressive is your command of structure for the most part, my only critical statement would be a couple lines that didn't flow quite as well as the others. Overall though, I enjoyed it :)

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