What collaboration, the writing is seamless and flows really well. Characters are well drawn and the hint of trouble with Meli’s sister is a good plot move.
Just one point to consider, Meli was off to see her sister at the end of chapter 2 and I would have liked a link to that point somewhere in chapter 3.
Great job guys, co-writing is hard but you two make it look easy.
Thank you so much for inviting me in such a wonderful journey which is to write this story. I just hope I can do it justice and that people will enjoy what our crazy minds conjure up. Thanks once again for the faith you have in me :) You're friendship is most valuable.
Ok, I know this is the last thing you want to hear, what with the obvious issues going on in this book, but I couldn't help but be delighted and think "Adorable!" I know, go get the torches and pitchforks, I deserve it. But I still think its cool that you pulled that off...