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Coup d'état

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Coup d'état
Elowyn has been sent to assassinate Kam'ah'srah, a dark lord moving his army forth to enslave all of the elven tribes. She joined his legion to hopefully be closer to the lord but it seems that she may get too close. Will she be able to finish her mission or will a shocking realization hit her?

Keywords: 
Elves, Elf, Assassin, Love, Turmoil, Guilt, Tribe
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countzero

This is a fine excerpt and would make a great first page teaser at the beginning of the novel. I really want to see you continue with your stories. It feels like you have a better handle on this than you did in Knight. Both have excellent potential though and should have more, more, more! :) RMH

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This is really well-written. Way to go! I could easily "see" the characters and the scene in my mind's eye...

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This is really well-written. Way to go! I could easily "see" the characters and the scene in my mind's eye...

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faith.ruelle

first I love your cover !, your plot grabs the reader and keeps it. More please you can take this very far :) Great read.

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barrycarver

Fantastically interesting and, with only a few minor touch-ups (better suggested by more grammatical experts) a really fine bit of writing.

I can see how this could easily spawn the rest of the story - both before and after this incident.

Well done. Please continue.

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