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A tale I enjoyed reading and probably inspirational to you in the writing.I like the introduction of poems,to sooth the savage breast . Well done you've arrived at a family story. Mine own one is 'Adios' if you care to read. Funny thing I've been asked to write about m childhood by a film director. So far I've kept clear but now I'm wondering. If you hadn't written our story it would all be lost to the world.
Good luck and you have my vote.
Well done with just one spelling error but not overpowering your story. You got me to think. In this way your message succeeded. That alone,was what made this a winner./Joe Vote given
You have put a personal touch on your kindness;
Personally thank you for giving me a chance at which to portray my work
In a firm believer that faith will evoke,
In timeless years captivated with a storm
In radiant seasons to help calm its plausible norm
In sweet dreams filled... Show more
You have put a personal touch on your kindness;
Personally thank you for giving me a chance at which to portray my work
In a firm believer that faith will evoke,
In timeless years captivated with a storm
In radiant seasons to help calm its plausible norm
In sweet dreams filled rainbows among a brilliance filled bright
Be still in the morning then forget the night;
On a porch swing sipping ice tea with friends
Does one ever equate logic with fear?
This all sincerely depends;
Peace be still
For the one who encounters the storms in life
A brilliant appease that puts caged fury in flight
In dashed resolution toward inhiliation
Peace Be Still
We all should strive to learn its valuable lessons