“She stood in the deep, dark woods, breath shallow and cold prickling over her skin despite the hot, heavy air. She took a step back, then two, as the urge to run fell over her.”
Naomi Bowes lost her innocence the night she followed her father into the woods. In freeing the girl trapped in the root cellar, Naomi revealed the horrible extent of her father’s crimes and made him infamous. No matter how close she gets to... Show more
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Laurel Carter has lost everything.
Stuck in an insane asylum that is beginning to destroy her.
She is losing hope and discovering loneliness.
That... Show more
True though it kind of felt rushed I loved the ending though!