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A Second Chance

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A Second Chance

Rosa is still in mourning over her daughter's death. But has she really lost her forever? Or does fate have something else in store for them.


Keywords: 
faith, daughter, mother, Heaven, death, life, grief
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ᗪค౮૯ᗷᑕ८คՈคძค

Before I crack the cover I see confusion. Your lettering on your cover is very hard to read. It needs to stand out so you could add contrasting color (white I'd suggest) behind the letters. Now let me check out the written word.

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ᗪค౮૯ᗷᑕ८คՈคძค

Wow! Powerful! The only problem I see with it is you have fulfilled your promise in the title. Where do you go from here?

mysterywriter723

Thanks, Dave. Well, I'll probably just leave it as a short story. LOL!

mysterywriter723

Oh, and I fixed the cover. Thanks for letting me know.

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Parth Toroneel

very well written.... enjoyed your story. hope you could continue with this story further.
it's a nice start by the way.... :)

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mysterywriter723

Thanks, Parth. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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judycolella

As a mom, I was having a hard time with the beginning of this, so the way you ended it...well. Beautifully written as always, touching in exactly the right measure all the things that matter most - faith, hope, love...well done, indeed. Thank you for sharing this!

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mysterywriter723

Thanks, Judy. I appreciate your thoughts.

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