Birds of a feather! I was a little surprised myself, Melissa. You have nice flow, good characters in a tense story...there at the end. And, I really liked your narrative. Excellent job (again). Patrick
Your story reminded me of the saying 'Birds of the same feather flock together'. It is true with the characters in the story. They will know each other better than anyone else. Hmm. God makes the perfect match that is beyond human thoughts.