A nice piece of fiction. Nice story. I just have 3 problems in this that u might think upon.
1 Your story seems too straight forward
2 How did she know about the dens. About the scyllas deadlyness.
3 There is very less elaboration of stuff. U could have explained the history a lot and other stuff but you have not.
PS . I loved that cover page artwork. Did you make it yourself.
nice one! please check mine too https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-yolla-will-the-story-of-us/
Recently.. my interest in English novels popped out from no where.. its is the first novel book i have ever read in 18 years of my life..
And now i'm impatiently waiting for the "DRANGON PRINCESS" (the next part).. how much time do i have to wait?
And at the end..You are a wonderful writer i must say.. i will be reading your other books too...All the Best <3