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Kvistr

Book 1 of the Wyrda Saga By:
User: melmmhs94
Kvistr
Three years have passed since Eragon defeated Galbatorix. The new Dragon Rider order has dawned, and an egg is about to hatch for a very lucky Rider. But all is not well in the country yet. A dark, mysterious enemy returns and threatens to upend the country back into evil and war. Can the small band of Dragon Riders eliminate this threat? Will they all survive, or will the threat defeat the Dragon Riders once and for all?


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J-Ann

Hi Melissa,

I hope you remember me. I have had some time to look back at the chapters you sent me and the comments I made.

I do have some more time now that I can beta again. We can flesh out some of the things I pointed out before and I am willing to work with you on them.

If you are still willing to let me beta for you, you can email me at the same email as before.

Hoping to hear from you.

J-Ann

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zEragon

This was a really good book! I was just wondering on when you planned on writing the second book(If that's what you are going to do) and If I could proof read it as I have seen quite a few spelling mistakes in your books(Although they don't make them unreadable).

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melmmhs94

Yay, a comment!! Kvistr isn't done yet so Book two (Adurna) won't be in the works for a while. But I do plan on continuing at some point. Right now I'm going to be revising what I have of Kvistr so far, fix all of those grammar mistakes and lengthen the chapters without fixing... Show more

melmmhs94

Uhm, as to you proofreading, I'd really appreciate the help more with expanding the chapters. I can find grammar and spelling mistakes easily enough (i have no idea how they got into the manuscript! I checked them like a million times!) but I need help with plot and character... Show more

zEragon

Sure, lol, that sounds great! I will try to do my best to help you with your books! , I actually appreciate you even commenting back :P

melmmhs94

great! :) okay, im gonna send you a message so we can continue this via inbox rather than a comment thread.

zEragon

lol ok

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Vapricorn 83

It was really good, I wish to read more, you are a good writer and one day you will be a great writer, with less accidents or mistakes, misspellings aside, since you probably type fast when writing your stories!

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melmmhs94

I do type pretty fast, so the same misspellings happen often. but thats what spell check is for!
im really glad you enjoyed it. Im having such fun writing this!! but im currently working on my Fairy Tail fanfic so you should check that one out. Chapter one is done for now, and im... Show more

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Deleted User

Now that I am re-reading Kvistr, I noticed Alanna is wearing animal hide. I belive elves don't use animals to make things, or to eat. Is it a mistake on your part, something I fail to understand, or something that you failed to explain? I am much confused

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melmmhs94

Even though elves dont hunt, traders still come through Ellesmera so they are ale to buy the hides. plus, animal hide pants are more fashionable than fabric. Its also tougher so its better for Rider training. Sorry, did i not explain?

Deleted User

no x3 It's okay though

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Lorian Lilsiel

I LOVED that series Melissa and was sad when the Inheritance cycle ended. I love that you picked up where they left off. Now I have to tell my brother (Another Inheritance cycle fan) about you series so he can read it too!

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melmmhs94

great! Oh, and I have an Inheritance Cycle group. You shoul join! its been inactive ever since I created it, but you should still join!

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Deleted User

lol I am on the second book in Inheritance cycle series, so im finally getting the idea x3

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Deleted User

.3. Im surprised I remember the amount of eggs but not the amount of Eldunari .3.

melmmhs94

i dont remember either number. all i remember was it was a shit-ton. eragon doesnt have to worry about lost knowledge because of the eldunari, and saphira isnt pressured to breed because of the eggs. its an ideal situation.

Deleted User

.3. yerp (yes) :3

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Thestral

Please write the next book. Please.

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Thestral

Yesssss! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Nala Darkwing

Ah, I am not a fan fix girl, I can do them in my head, but as soon as I try to put it on paper, everything goes blank. I am trying to get certain fan fics work, and it is taking forever for me.

Thestral

Same here

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CALDARI H.L.P.S.A.O. 117

mellissa your good realy good at writting

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CALDARI H.L.P.S.A.O. 117

i wish i could be detaled as you i have bad explaining my imagination since most of it doesnt make sense to me

melmmhs94

thanks! I'm glad you think so. I try to be as descriptive as possible but i can forget to imagine character's thoughts and impressions unless I can hear their voice. See, i don' see the book as a bunch of words. At first, that IS what I see, but pretty soon the book becomes a... Show more

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