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The First Sneeze

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User: mirandabm
The First Sneeze
A very short story relating the trauma - and joy - surrounding a premature birth. Entered in the Family Storis competition.

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lenora.books

A beautiful remembrance of a stressful/blessed time. Especially knowing that she grew up to be a healthy child! I would love to read the events leading up to this first sneeze.

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marriah14

I did not think I would like it at fist. Then I took a chance and read and and loved it. Excelent writing.

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kimmyj79

I loved this short story. It hit home for me, I have twin daughters that was born premature.

You really don't know what to think when your child is so small, and they do something to make you wanna cry, laugh, hug everything in one:)

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sereni

It is wonderful story how medicine has progressed to save someone so small.Also the fears that go along with having a premature baby.I enjoyed it. Serena

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mirandabm

Thank you so much for reading the story Serena, and for your kind comments.

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luckiestone

This book was such a nice way to show how you would feel when you have a new-born. I like this book alot. Even though it was kind of small. You should write more storys like this one. Possibly longer if you want. I would love to read more storys like the one you wrote and the one I just read. The story in a way was kind of funny because the little baby had to wear doll clothes. Now that was funny and cute. Anyway keep writing... Show more

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luckiestone

This book was such a nice way to show how you would feel when you have a new-born. I like this book alot. Even though it was kind of small. You should write more storys like this one. Possibly longer if you want. I would love to read more storys like the one you wrote and the one I just read. The story in a way was kind of funny because the little baby had to wear doll clothes. Now that was funny and cute. Anyway keep writing... Show more

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mirandabm

Thanks Scribbler, I'm glad you like the story. You're right, it is very short, but that's because it was a ten minute writing exercise. It just all poured out and I wouldn't want to make it longer now. How's your writing going? Good luck with it,
Miranda

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gjgurl

that was sweet i think every mother has that one first moment that they will never forget about their child...good job:)

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