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Waiting for love

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Waiting for love
Stan Duncan, a young professional criminal, and an orphan. Stan was spending the days of his life, with the gang, living on robbery. One day, his friend Andrew gets in jail, so Stan saw them there. Andrew gave the key of his house to Stan, but the gang can’t help herself from kicking Stan and get the house. They drag him to the dumpster where he meets a hobo, who changes his life. As he was talking to the hobo he said, “I made this crimes when I was young, because I needed parental love.” What is that life changing event? What is his story? And how he is going to be better person?

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Deleted User

The concept of your novel seems very thought out and because your words are so powerful, it seems you are reflecting something that was occurring in your life at the time of creating this work of literature.

The only critiques I am going to give you are:

1. When writing, choose one tense. Throughout your story, you seem to switch between present and past tense very often which doesn't allow what you are trying to convey, to... Show more

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naji.kadri

Thank you so much for reading my book. I'm glad that a busy admin like you had time to read my book. I'm still learning and practicing!

Deleted User

Haha no it's totally fine, I enjoy giving writers feedback on their work plus I wasn't that busy at the time anyways & that's great, practice pays off!

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♥ davebccanada ♥

Your book is a fresh look at life and I enjoyed reading it very much. I do hope you write more about Stan Duncan.

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naji.kadri

Thanks @Davebccanda. I'm glad that you like my book! and soon when I have time the story will continue

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