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Gloom Rising

Don't Call the Cops. By:
User: chinaren
Gloom Rising
In the world of the future, violence, thuggery and rape is all too common, and that's just the cops.

Now a new player is in town, and things are going to go downhill real fast.

Keywords: 
horror, future, scifi
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chinaren

Thanks DHolm, I shall look at the font size again. Sorry about that!

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dholm1

This is a good beginning, but very hard to read with the font size so small. I don't have any major complaints about the structure and characters. Started with a bang and the characters are interesting. So this would be something I would buy and I don't think I can give higher praise than that. There are a few rough places concerning grammar and punctuation; a few awkwardly worded sentences, but these are only minor details.... Show more

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