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A Vampires begining

An All But Sane World By:
User: pally3209
A Vampires begining
Woke up in an unfamiliar place with unfamiliar people a girl named Clare has no memories befor the age of 16. where is she and why is she there?

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pally3209

that was an edit i made and wanted to keep off for a little bit. lol oh well i just forgot when i took it from word... well now im getting the filling i should finish the book thanks :)

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ddsgale

It seems like you have a good start on this. Running it through a spell check wouldn't hurt, but other than that you have an intriguing start. My only question is on the last paragraph you put down that the first week a girl asked Clare if she'd eat her. I want to make sure I'm understanding it right, it's basically public knowledge that Clare's a vampire? Also, make sure to always start a new paragraph for dialogue. Other... Show more

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