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Christmas for Dummies

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User: goffer23
Christmas for Dummies
Ryan Gregory, grieving the loss of his mother, must come to terms with a whole new threat when a strange visitor invades his house on Christmas Eve. But what this visitor wants is not what he expected.

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sereni

Another great story definitely pulled at my heartstrings. Smooth and well written, thanks for this story. Serena

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Rgabel

I was impressed with your style. Excellent writing with good grammar and well construction scenes.

You do a superb job of capturing gut wrenching emotions with a touch of prose here and there. You write fresh images with creative groupings of words.

As far as quality of writing, I felt you were the best in the group of contestants. Story had a definite moral. You just lost me in the description of the message. Just a tad to... Show more

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gooduklady

As usual, you never fail to please. This is an exceptional story and written very well indeed. Seriously, are you really only 22 years old? You wrote a winner with The Cracked Orchid, and I do believe you have another with this thought-provoking entry.

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