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Roosevelt Lodge

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Roosevelt Lodge
Isabella Barrington has returned to Matthew Ash at the Roosevelt Lodge, high in the Rocky Mountains. It is late Fall, and Matthew has finished his Masterpiece.

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Deleted User

This was breathtaking. So erotic and yet so subtle. I envy your ability with words.

It sounds like there's more to this tale, like this is part of a series. Is there more?

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felixthecat

Thank you so much. I actually never thought of this chapter (or any other) in terms of erotic. i simply wanted to write about the passion between the two lovers re-united.

This short is actually a chapter from an uncompleted novel. I just pooped 3/4 of the way through, unable to... Show more

Deleted User

Lol, yeah I understand not being able to finish a project.

Perhaps a better word than "erotic" would be "sensual"...?

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Chris-Jean

Pat, I loved the way you able to show the love Isabella and Matthew share for each other without divulging every intimate detail.

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Poetwriter2011

Patrick,

You are an awesome and exceptional writer that you are! I am glad you are my mentor. When I read your stories they inspire me to be a better poet and writer.

God Bless you! :)

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gooduklady

I am in tears....from the beauty of your words, your talent and your graciousness. You are truly a gifted writer, Patrick, and having read this I have to admit there is no-one better than you.

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xmeli.j.nightlyx

This was... wow-wee, no words to describe your amazing talent. You are definitely my mentor. When your first book is out in stores I will be in line to buy!

Blessings,
Meli

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felixthecat

What am I doing here?
This is where my writing heart is. My friends. My peers.

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felixthecat

Laz...so thanks, buddy:) Out there. It's REALLY hard, lol. Who buys Romance? Nobody I've been able to find yet. But I'm honored that the king of romance likes my story/chapter:)

Paige.
I keep wondering in that nice way if I'll ever catch you in sheer ability to write:) Your comment is like a pearl set before me. You should see my smile:)

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lazarus67

Patrick...I've said this a few times, I'm sure, "What are you doing here? You should be out there promoting your writing, filling bookstore shelves and signing books!"

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felixthecat

Coming from an author of your talent, I am humbled!
I have to admit, lol, I had a few women editors who helped steer me. I hope it came off as real from Isabella's pov. Certainly it was easy to "be" Matthew. And yes...there is definitely a difference between sex, and love and sex..I believe. Tough to pull off without being prurient...I tried to capture the best aspect of it in the context of the story.
Thanks so much!

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